外研版同步写作专题讲座6个
 
外研版SB2 MODULE 1
如何写“健康”说明文
 
第一步 写法指导 教你如何谋篇布局
写这样的文章，一般要写明什么样的做法会对健康有利或有害，人们应该怎样做才能保持健康等。这样的文章尽管属于说明文，但也不可避免地会使用叙述、议论等。这类文章的语言特点是：
1．时态相对统一，一般以一般现在时为主。
2．以主动语态和陈述句式为主，但为了表达灵活也可以使用其他表达形式。
3．恰当地使用过渡词来充分体现文章的逻辑关系。
写这样的文章，一般采用以下写作策略：
1．开门见山提出主题，说明自己所发现的现象。
2．分析所给内容，然后进行详细说明。说明所给内容时可以先说现象，也可以先说后果，再说引起这种后果的原因，不管用何种方式，都要注意表述清晰、层次分明。
3．最后归纳总结或发表意见。这一部分的内容主要是提出自己的建议。
第二步 黄金表达 教你如何营造亮点
1．Recently/Nowadays/These days, I find ...
Recently/Nowadays/These days, there exists a phenomenon that ...
2．As a result, ... cause/lead to not only ... but also ..., as well as ..., so/therefore ...
It is important for sb.to do sth.
We should ...
3．Therefore, we'd better ...
It's a good idea for us to ...
第三步 以例示法 教你如何联句成篇
[题目要求]
假定你是李华，你的笔友Jane最近总是感觉身体不适，因此写信向你询问如何保持健康。请你根据以下要点提示给她回信。
要点提示：
1．合理饮食；2.锻炼身体；3.保证充足睡眠，不要熬夜。
注意：1.词数100～120(信的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数)；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jane,
I'm sorry to hear that you are not very well these days.________________________________________________________________________
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Best wishes.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
[三步作文法]
第一步：搜索词汇
1．健康：healthy/fit
2．饮食：diet
3．生活方式：lifestyle
4．确保：make_sure
5．伤害：injure
第二步：由词造句
1．你应该有一个健康的生活方式，这会有助于你保持健康。
①You should have a good lifestyle. It will help you keep fit.
②You should have a good lifestyle, which will help you keep fit.
2．在做运动时，你一定要小心不要使自己受伤。
①When you do some exercise, you must be careful not to be injured.
②When doing some exercise, you must be careful not to be injured.
第三步：连句成篇
Dear Jane，
I'm sorry to hear that you are not very well these days. In your letter you asked me how to stay healthy. Here is my advice.
You should have a good lifestyle, which will help you keep fit. Firstly, you should keep a balanced diet. You should avoid eating food high in fat and too much sweet food. Make sure you eat more fresh vegetables and fruits. Secondly, taking exercise every day helps build a strong body. As a result, you will rarely catch a cold. When doing some exercise, you must be careful not to be injured. As we all know, regular exercise is an important part of keeping us healthy. Finally, make sure you have enough sleep and you mustn't stay up too late at night.
You can read some proverbs about health as well and I truly hope my advice is helpful and you'll get well soon.
Best wishes.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
 
外研版SB2 MODULE 2
如何回复信件
 

1．信头：寄信人地址和写信日期，写在信封右上角，地址由小到大。例如：
No.2 Nanjing Street
Beijing, 100000
China
June 2, 2011
2．信内地址：写在发信日期下一行顶格写。私人信件一般不写信内地址。
3．称呼：顶格，要大写，并且称呼后通常用逗号。
4．正文：每段起首处空4～6个字母的距离。
5．结束语：首字母大写，其后用逗号。私人信件比较随便，可用Yours或Yours ever等。
6．签名：除了对亲人或熟悉的朋友外，必须写全姓名。

1．开头语：
①Thank you very much for your letter!
②Glad to receive your letter of July 3rd.
③I'm glad to receive your letter.
④Thank you for your letter.
⑤I'm writing to express ...
⑥I'm writing to ask about ...
2．正文中可能出现的表达语：
①I suggest you do ...
②I think you should ...
③I'm sure you will ...
3．结尾常用语：
①I have to stop now.
②I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
③Please give/send my regards / best wishes to ...
④Please remember me to ...

 [题目要求]
假如你是李燕，你的笔友Jenny给你写信询问我们国家在公共场所禁止吸烟的问题，请根据以下要点给她回信。
1．抽烟在中国很普遍；
2．人们逐渐意识到其危害；
3．各大网站顺势呼吁公务员率先戒烟。
注意：1.词数：120～150；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
[三步作文法]
第一步：搜索词汇
1．放弃　　　　　　　　　　  give_up
2．不但……而且……              not_only_..._but_also_...
3．与……相关                         be_related_to
4．环境                                   environment
5．影响                                   affect
6．认识到                                  realize
7．禁令                                    ban
第二步：由词造句
1．在信中你问我为什么我们国家的公务员被要求戒烟。
In your letter you asked me why public servants in our country are_asked_to_give_up_smoking.
2．在中国很多人吸烟，既损害了自己的身体，又污染了环境。
①In China many people smoke and it affects_their_health_and_pollutes_the_environment.
②In China many people smoke, which_affects_their_health_and_pollutes_the_environment.
3．更糟的是，很可能有一些青少年会模仿大人而去吸烟，这使得家长和老师都很着急。
What's worse, it_is_likely_that the teenagers will follow the adults and start to smoke, which makes their parents and teachers worried.
第三步：连句成篇
Dear Jenny.
Your letter reached me shortly after I had finished my homework. It's very nice of you to think of me.
In your letter you asked me why public servants in our country are asked to

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